Wednesday, October 8, 2008

Beowulfs poem

The brave warrior beowulf was strong and big.he fought that demo,that fiend grendel with feriocity that one that filled villagers with frantic fears.Beowulf brilliantly succed in the amazing mission.with glory he had won the victory and made his people join an dshow him appreciation for his great bonorable bravery.to take on the great big beast that people once use to fear.they gasped with no sense of sorrow,felt no regret for his suffering,went tracing his bloody footprint,his beaten and lonely flight,to the edge of the lake doomed and already weary of his vanishing life.

6 comments:

Gl0RiA AkA C00KiE said...

i like.. u did a good job!!

cinthya said...

UR POEM IS UNIQUE. I LIKED YOUR POEM.GOOD THAT YOU DID POEM IT CAME OUT NICE.

Guadalupe said...

hey angel
that's ia nice poem i love it.

julisa castellon said...

hey rangel i like your alliteration, its cool can you help me on mine? hey comment mine plz?

Lancer said...

wow dude real nice man you got some poetic talent jo.
keep up with this shit man and thanks for the comment peace out dude.

THE LOVE PLACE said...

Nice poem Angel just remeber that after a sentence if you put a period, remember that the other letter is capital. But great job keep it up!!!!!